Overall marks

AS Coursework Overall Marks

Name: ELWELL ROWAN

Planning – Comments and mark out of               15/20 For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet

Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of          50/60 For full comments please see the production marks sheet

Evaluation – Comments and mark out of            13/20 Question 1: PowerPoint/SlideShare – Some detail on how conventions used in production with some understanding shown of how mise-en-scene used. Basic evidence of real products. Question 2: Prezi – Some good understanding of how characters represented and affect on audience through use of mise-en-scene. Use of theorists would have enhanced answer. Question 3: Audio with images – Some detail on why distributor chosen with some examples used as evidence. Shows good understanding of audience and distributor profile. Question 4 and 5: Video – basic detail on potential audience and how they were attracted, lacks good use of research into viewing figures and rely too heavily on stereotypes. Q&A with potential audience but no reflection on feedback from audience.   Question 6: PowerPoint/SlideShare – Some detail on technologies used in all parts of production. At times detail is too descriptive and lacks in-depth analysis. No real sense of what was learnt. Question 7: Emaze – good cleat detail on progress from prelim task with good addition of screen grabs from both products. Reflective detail on progress too descriptive and not analytical. Some good detail on questions showing understanding of task, audience and genre. At times lacks good analytical detail, good use of images but lacks good use of research in answering questions. Read your work, as there are lapses in spelling, punctuation and capital letters! Good clear layout throughout.

Total                  78/100

Grade: B